The jokes could be a bit quicker cut, but that BUTT!
It's like my steak, well done!
Nice animation, but what's with the creepy kid at the end? I like the subliminal stuff in the background. I feel that with this short of a video and this simple of a story, the animation could have had a little more focus.
Marleen and the creepy kid at the end are both characters in a series of mine. The kid is like Marleen's biggest fan. Anywho, thank you for your kindness. People seem very mixed on this one. I'm glad someone actually mentioned the stuff in the background though. Anywho, I agree with you completely. Thank you very much : )
Meh. I feel that the jokes were slow and sloppily executed. I feel that you can do a lot better considering your decent microphone quality. Also, work on how you draw your arms and foreshortening. It will help you a long way.
im still getting use to writing im mostly impervise guy and im mostly do it in 1 layer guy sometimes so yeah
It made my friend giggle until his stomach hurt. Mission accomplished.
I can do alot of voices.
I can do more voices. If you are looking for something specific, let me know and I could try it out.
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